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 Mine Kagamure *DONE AND APPROVED*

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PostSubject: Mine Kagamure *DONE AND APPROVED*   Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:07 am

Vital Statistics:

Name: Mine Kagamure
Age/Grade: 15 years old, grade 9
Race: Mixed Breed. Between a human demon, and a wolf demon!
Gender: Female
Height: 4 feet 11 inches, she looks like a little wolf pup when transforms!
Weight: 37 kilograms, will be lighter when she transforms into her secondary look (wolf pup)!
Appearance:
- Main form (human like) : She has long red hair which comes down until her hips. She has red eyes, and 4 mini demon wings. 2 hidden under her hair, and another 2 on her back.
- Secondary form (demon wolf pup) : In this form, she wears a necklace. She looks like a little wolf pup, with red eyes, black ears (expect for the tips, its red on the tips), black/gray body color, red feet, and a red tail (tip of the tail, the rest is black). She also has black demon wings. Here's how she looks :
Demon 1 *human like*
Demon 2 *demon wolf pup*

Relations:

Sexuality: Ummm... Kinda shy, so she can't express it much. She prefer to hide and kept the secret to herself, not sharing it to a friend or anything. But yes, she love boys~ So, Straight!
Preferences: People that isn't to romantic or serious.

Likes: She spent most of her life training to get stronger in her offensive attacks, for defensive, she can use her wings. After that, she loves drinking tea! Pure green tea. Food that she likes is anything sweet, chicken (with any way to cook it), and berries. She loves drawing sketches, and listening to music. That's why she's good with the bass.
Dislikes: Bi boys, Bi girls, anything sour, anything spicy (food, duhhh), and SOUP!!!! Oh, and she hates it when someone insulted her. After that, good luck running away. She also didn't like to be called Kagamure.


Back story:
History: Mine is a girl in a lonely demon world. With nowhere to go. Her family left her. Well, here's the story, so listen up! I won't repeat it!
Mine used to lived in a human world. Well, WAS. Until at the age of 13, she growed demon wings, and started to transforming into a winged wolf pup. After thinking she's a weirdo (or a circus freak!), her whole step family dumped her, left her, alone in the shadows. One day, a year after that happens, a reaper took her into the demon world, and before he took her there, he says these words :

" Mine, why are you in the human world? Join me in the demon world! There, you will be save, and you will not be alone again.... "

Then the reaper took her, and they both lived together in the demon world, for a half year. Because, the reaper leaved her, and promised will come back, but he didn't. After waiting for a long time, alone, Mine found a school that is in the center of all the world portal. And that school is called :

The Nexus Academy

She didn't want to be left alone in the shadows anymore. And so, she joined the academy....


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PostSubject: Re: Mine Kagamure *DONE AND APPROVED*   Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:26 am

You forgot to put your name.
Your sexuality, from the way you described it, is straight, not bi.
Your preferences should not be pictures of your self. Those should go under appearence. Preferences are whatyou look for in a lover.
Also for your race you put demon but your shpeshifting to either a wolf or your a were wolf? Are you a mixed breed or what?

By the way, I'm not trying to be rude and critizize you, you just a have a few things that need fixing. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Mine Kagamure *DONE AND APPROVED*   Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:37 am

Desiree wrote:
You forgot to put your name.
Your sexuality, from the way you described it, is straight, not bi.
Your preferences should not be pictures of your self. Those should go under appearence. Preferences are whatyou look for in a lover.
Also for your race you put demon but your shpeshifting to either a wolf or your a were wolf? Are you a mixed breed or what?

By the way, I'm not trying to be rude and critizize you, you just a have a few things that need fixing. Smile
Oh..... Ok! Thanks for the crit. Its really helpful. Is it right now?
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PostSubject: Re: Mine Kagamure *DONE AND APPROVED*   Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:52 am

All set!

APPROVED

Welcome to Nexus academy.
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